Thursday, August 7, 2008

Poem Time

I love poem time, don't you? This one is full of angst because that was what the contest called for. *g*

It won honorable mention in two contests. Let me know what you think.

To Die

Clouds cross my eyes salty rain begins to pour
Sliding down my cheeks hitting the ground
Puddles of sadness appearing around me
Drowning in defeat why did he leave
Pools of blood follow in his wake
As he drags the remains of my torn dying
Heart out of my bruised battered chest
His Smile filled with cruelty, red demon eyes
Bore into me as he begins to extinguish
My light, the very essence of me, my mind draws a blank
Stealing away my breath with stinging, slashing words
Hate echoes in my ears, he strips my soul bare
Ragging storming words roll off his tongue
Attacking me from the earth to the sky, lightening strikes
My legs begin to carry me safely away
Wishing to Escape this constant onslaught of evil
"You aren't worthy of love" shoots from his mouth
Flying through the air, an arrow taking flight
Piercing my flesh, with one final blow
I fall to the ground, pools of blood envelop me
Alone, cold, dying...dead.

© Lauren Murphy, All rights reserved


Janice said...

That is full of angst.


Lauren Murphy said...

Yeah it was hard for me to write because of it but I have to say that I was pleased with the end result. Thanks for dropping by.

Jolie said...

Sheesh. Angsty, for sure. I feel like jumping off a ledge now.

Just kidding. You know I love ya. :P

Lauren Murphy said...

Jolie I could never let you jump of a ledge. I would have to find some way to catch you. ;)